Friday, November 20, 2020

Tanka -Tears Gone Comments

Rating: 5.0

the tongue stings her cheek
and it isn't with the salt
on the way to heart
where finally no tears left
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M. Asim Nehal
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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 November 2020

The empty cry reflects no tear. Sometimes tear dries up due to more sorrow. An amazing poem is brilliantly penned....5 stars

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S H 20 November 2020

Yes life does test with tears.

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Varsha M 20 November 2020

Tongue and tear how come together Tongue utter word that hurt And tear roll down the cheek every time.

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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