Wednesday, February 10, 2021

Tanka - Style Comments

Rating: ★5.0

wear this mask daily
white powder and painted lips
softness of your eyes
nothing to embrace further
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M. Asim Nehal
Lips
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Sylvia Frances Chan 13 February 2021

So no moonlight, no washing tonight? Just a simple question, Asim Sir, but aside of that all this is a remarkable and amusing tanka! I have truly enjoyed,5 Stars!

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Ricky Manhatten 11 February 2021

Very Interesting tanka.

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Kostas Lagos 11 February 2021

Cleverly written tanka!

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Usha F 10 February 2021

Artificial and artifacts.

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Varsha M 10 February 2021

Sir stupendous. Makeup is life for all ladies....its birth right

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Indira Renganathan 10 February 2021

Very amusing tanka...made me laugh 5*****

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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