Tanka - Soulful Harvesting Comments

2) for here we are paid for the fruit of months of hard labour. And after months of hard time, now is the time of abundance. Good work. Enjoyed

Beautiful tanka. Provokes the Nostalgic memories of my childhood, when the entire agricultural activities were done manually. At the time of harvesting, scores of people throng in the fields, for it is time of joy

I believe this tanka portrays the just rewards of our diligent efforts and the realization of our aspirations in life. Awesome..

The song of cuckoo is the song of joy and happiness that all around and involved in harvesting sings and enjoy. Great Imagery.

White playful horse is the pounding and a proud heart jumping with joy and the gallop is the eyes running from one end to another.

Asim Ji, with this tanka, you have explored diverse facets of a farmer's existence, wherein they exhibit immense endurance while awaiting the fruit of their labor, and those around them aspire for their own desires.

Your tanka together with the cryptic note is awesome 👌.

truly wonderful Asim Bravo! ! !

Brilliant short work.....thanks for sharing....