Tanka ~ Silence Aftermath Comments

Very heart moving imagery and feel! .. Excellently expressed! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++

For the pin drop silence fullest marks dear Asim ji

A silence after the deafening sound like a silence after the storm...says it all!

Yes very true, like after storm the complete silence.

Yes the perfect aftermath scene, Great imageries.

One of the best Tanka I have read so far. Full praises.

it has an eerie feel to it Bravo!

I concur with the comments of Poet Deepak SS. To my Poem List.

A meaningful and poignant poem so succinctly expressed. Brilliantly crafted.

I can co-relate to many things and one being the Vally of Afghan now. Great write, Asim Sir.