Tanka - Shipwreck Comments
Broken pieces of
Cold emotions are sinking
In deep salty sea
Of my measureless blue tears,
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Fantastic imagery and comparison. Cold emotions sinking in deep salty sea of tears while the heart is a shipwreck. Overflow of emotions too is genuine. Great write. Thanks for sharing.
Sinking of cold emotions in deep salty sea of...... tears 'As this heart is a shipwreck'. This is indeed a wonderful poem which feels like a soft flow of morning breeze. Thanks.
Cold emotions are sinking in broken pieces. Very amazing sharing definitely. Cleaver and neat composition shared....10
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8/7/2025 3:58:43 AM # 1.0.0
The salty sea, sinking pieces of wreck, measureless tears..... all these are such suggestive images giving a glimpse into the disturbed and violently shattered heart ! Great Tanka!