Wednesday, March 22, 2023

Tanka- Salvation Comments

Rating: 4.4

down the country side
in the dark and silent night
a saint walks alone
meditating and praying
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M. Asim Nehal
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Pallavi Tripathi 23 March 2023

Is he doctor strange? ;)

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Richard Wlodarski 23 March 2023

In this neck of the woods, we do not witness such a ceremony. How I wish that we did! In my heart, I believe that it would improve the quality of our lives. Esteemed Poet Nehal, I Thank You for your cultured gift!

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Rajan T Renganathan 22 March 2023

We often see them wandering in their own way.

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Tihama Hykam 22 March 2023

Perfect tanka.. They wander to achieve salvation which remains elusive.

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M. Asim Nehal

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