Saturday, August 7, 2021

Tanka ~ Rose Comments

Rating: ★5.0

as she gazed those eyes
it reflected emptiness
like thorns piercing heart
taking the blood away from
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M. Asim Nehal
red rose Emptiness
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Zumas Millamo 09 August 2021

Wonderful Tanka, just brilliant.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 08 August 2021

taking the blood away from.the heart to the rose to make it red, wonderfully said,5 Stars!

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Indira Renganathan 08 August 2021

Excellent imagination....5*****

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Zoyza Da Vinka 07 August 2021

Wow so well written poem/tanka.

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Juhaina Tumlu 07 August 2021

Brilliant Tanka! ! ! Nice philosophical.

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Mamta S 07 August 2021

Excellent Tanka....from eyes to the red rose it said everything.

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

Nagpur
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