Wednesday, July 13, 2011

Tanka Raining Comments

Rating: 5.0

Clouds are gathering
rain splashing on my window
releasing moisture
it continues to blow ill
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Heather Burns
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 14 July 2011

Nice effective poem. Rich in imagery and depth. Liked and rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'An umbrella' on page 1.

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