buzzing honeybees
dancing flowers in chill breeze
a hummingbird sings
touchy melancholy song
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Beautiful revival, that we can see and feel. Excellent! Full Sphere.
Melancholic songs revives memory! Beautiful Tanka, Asim ji.....Stars galore
Certain scenes of nature takes you back into the past years
Memory is a precious gift from God. I can't imagine life without it. A beautiful poem! 5 stars.
A loveliest Tanka about Memory. Brilliantly put! 5 Stars full, Mr. Asim Sir!
Lovely scenes that could induce the mind to look back at one's life of yesteryears. Beautifully crafted Tanka.
How wonderfully corelated the honeybees with memory. Great work.
Oh, How beautiful and heart touching! .. Such beautiful sentiments! .. Awesome! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++