Wednesday, February 6, 2019

Tanka Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

winter sun whistles
over the foggy mountain
to melt and give way
your shivering lips settles
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M. Asim Nehal
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Gordon Walter 24 August 2020

your shivering lips settles helping our tender love grow Wow

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Deepak S S 15 July 2020

romantic expression nicely done

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Aniruddha Pathak 06 February 2019

your shivering lips settles helping our tender love grow Romantic indeed and well said.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 February 2019

A great romantic expression reflected in this lovely poem dear friend! Thanks for sharing.......................10

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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