Friday, February 8, 2019

Tanka - Life ~ Life Comments

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Isn't this life is like
mirage in a desert, chased
passing of our age
it sucks our water in quest
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M. Asim Nehal
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T Rajan Evol 26 July 2020

Stupendous Tanka nothing else can be said about it.

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Deepak S S 15 July 2020

Excellent it will fall drop by drop like our age leaving everything behind.

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Edward Kofi Louis 10 February 2019

Ages! ! ! Leaving everything behind. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 February 2019

These icy leaves are really very interesting leaves and you have truly enriched this poem with beautiful words. An excellent poem is well penned.10

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M. Asim Nehal

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