Isn't this life is like
mirage in a desert, chased
passing of our age
it sucks our water in quest
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Excellent it will fall drop by drop like our age leaving everything behind.
Ages! ! ! Leaving everything behind. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
These icy leaves are really very interesting leaves and you have truly enriched this poem with beautiful words. An excellent poem is well penned.10
Stupendous Tanka nothing else can be said about it.