Tuesday, June 21, 2016

(tanka) June Night Storm Comments

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Wind, rain, and thunder…
Lightning… brightening the sky
Before summer's day.
One dream wakes to another…
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Bill Galvin
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Sonia Walker 21 June 2016

Bill, a lovely Tanka poem. Your last line is such a nice surprise. ~ Sonia

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Bill Galvin 16 July 2016

Thank you so much, Sonia. I thought that I had already replied to your appreciation. I guess I didn't. Thank you again.

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