Tanka: Journey Comments

I love the first line's profound association on the autumn leaf's aimless journey. Great poem.

what a beautiful poem! personified imagery wonderful!

Sorry it took me so long to respond- had eyesight pronlems

This has talent written all over it and through it! ! ! 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

Oh! ! ! I like this very very much! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

The journey of that first colorful leaf has found a home in the lines of this reflective poem.

Love it -as Autumn is such a beautiful time of year. I can see the poem in action.