Sunday, May 8, 2016

Tanka-Iii Comments

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oxford cap flies high
vibrant hood pats on the back
ironed gown cringes
shy to take certificate
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Fabrizio Frosini 08 May 2016

:) a good tanka (even if I prefer the other one.. you know which one) - the note is funny, too ;)

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Shreej K.c 08 May 2016

'tanka' seems good- it doesn't discriminate between human and nature per se: -p but then 'classical haiku is difficult to catch and that's why the charm! Thank you for nice comments ☺

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