Saturday, August 24, 2013

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The Sun in morning
Weltering in blood is born
Burns in evening fire.
So in suffering sleep sons
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Narayanan Nair. P Perunthanam
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M Asim Nehal 23 November 2016

Burns in evening fire. So in suffering sleep sons Of every mummy here.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 24 August 2013

Burning is common for sun and sons. Nicely put in the poem. Thank you.

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