Friday, October 27, 2017

Tanka [from A Season For Everyone - Haiku & Tanka] 2 Comments

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I stay behind her
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Fabrizio Frosini
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Any fresh information about the health of Dr Fabrizio?

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It is reported that Dr Fabrizio is not keeping good health of late. May he get well soon

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Love this poem. Enjoyed the revisit. It is reported that Dr Fsbris

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This beautiful tanka is ranked 81 among the members poems today. Congratulations

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Mahtab Bangalee 16 September 2020

Up-down everywhere Savior- after earthly life Confident walks forth Sky the independent field Birds can fly there openly

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Unwritten Soul 10 January 2020

Hi Fabrizio, ...why i didnt send you unpublished poem for your team's anthologies, I dont feel i am good enough, not a competent one but you know i love how you guys penning things for reasons. I have much respect and hopeful for that... I am glad you initiate it, it shows that your pen is a best weapon and passionate in poetry too. Take care dear F., -Soul

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Fabrizio Frosini 21 January 2020

...not good enough/not sompetent...? ? ? what a silly thought! you ARE good!

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Unwritten Soul 05 January 2020

Fabriziooooo, the concept is nice. Will the soldier able to fight or to chase her, i think only ink can change all... When poetry twist the surprise

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Fabrizio Frosini 06 January 2020

:) Hi Soul. When a surprise from you too? ...Meaning: why don't you send me an unpublished poem for one of our anthologies? ;) :)

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Navod Dilhara 28 November 2019

This picturesque language did so extraordinarily drag my mind into so many imaginary envisaged occasions. Thank you for publishing.

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Fabrizio Frosini 30 November 2019

Hi Navod, thanks for your kind comment on my poem. Cheers.

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Pamela Sinicrope 12 April 2019

Like a soldier? Behind her? Fighting with poetry.Interesting imagery here of a woman in front and a soldier in back..and a poet through and through. You've made the world a better place with poetry...I wish we could fight with our words more and with less with weapons that draw blood.

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Fabrizio Frosini 14 April 2019

:) Hi Pam! fighting with words, not with weapons? it would surely make the world a much better place, right... Unfortunately it seems that too many love this kind of world (or even a worst one) , filled with weapons and hate...: (

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M Asim Nehal 13 March 2019

Fantastic tanka with nice imagery. Liked it.

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Fabrizio Frosini 19 March 2019

thanks for visiting and commenting on my poem, dear Asim. It's truly kind of you.

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Bharati Nayak 03 February 2018

Master Artist, I will say- - - -wow- - - - - - - beautiful! !

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Fabrizio Frosini 04 February 2018

a master? no, just one who loves poetry... but thank you so much, dear Bharati

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Fabio Doria 19 November 2017

the poem is really cool.As Minnie Froh said, why can't we vote?

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Fabrizio Frosini 24 November 2017

I answered the question: problem, with the ''rating'', is that there are people who simple like to 'joke' with the function... they are a minority, I know, but they are not so few... unfortunately

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Minnie Froh 15 November 2017

i would give a full 10 also to this tanka. why you don't want us to vote?

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Fabrizio Frosini 24 November 2017

problem, with the ''rating'', is that there are people who simple like to 'joke' with the function... they are a minority, I know, but they are not so few... unfortunately

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Fabio Doria 10 November 2017

ma la traduzione italiana manca.Perchè non l'aggiungi?

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Fabrizio Frosini 24 November 2017

perché per renderlo correttamente in italiano dovrei usare un numero maggiore di sillabe, e questo non mi va... ;)

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Rini Shibu 27 October 2017

Beautiful.. An inspiration to write a poem Fab Rini

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Fabrizio Frosini 27 October 2017

thank you, dear Rini. BTW, not a poem from you, for in the Anthology ' HOMO HOMINI LUPUS - Why To kill a Mockingbird? ' ?

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