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It is reported that Dr Fabrizio is not keeping good health of late. May he get well soon
Love this poem. Enjoyed the revisit. It is reported that Dr Fsbris
This beautiful tanka is ranked 81 among the members poems today. Congratulations
Up-down everywhere Savior- after earthly life Confident walks forth Sky the independent field Birds can fly there openly
Hi Fabrizio, ...why i didnt send you unpublished poem for your team's anthologies, I dont feel i am good enough, not a competent one but you know i love how you guys penning things for reasons. I have much respect and hopeful for that... I am glad you initiate it, it shows that your pen is a best weapon and passionate in poetry too. Take care dear F., -Soul
...not good enough/not sompetent...? ? ? what a silly thought! you ARE good!
Fabriziooooo, the concept is nice. Will the soldier able to fight or to chase her, i think only ink can change all... When poetry twist the surprise
:) Hi Soul. When a surprise from you too? ...Meaning: why don't you send me an unpublished poem for one of our anthologies? ;) :)
This picturesque language did so extraordinarily drag my mind into so many imaginary envisaged occasions. Thank you for publishing.
Like a soldier? Behind her? Fighting with poetry.Interesting imagery here of a woman in front and a soldier in back..and a poet through and through. You've made the world a better place with poetry...I wish we could fight with our words more and with less with weapons that draw blood.
:) Hi Pam! fighting with words, not with weapons? it would surely make the world a much better place, right... Unfortunately it seems that too many love this kind of world (or even a worst one) , filled with weapons and hate...: (
thanks for visiting and commenting on my poem, dear Asim. It's truly kind of you.
Master Artist, I will say- - - -wow- - - - - - - beautiful! !
a master? no, just one who loves poetry... but thank you so much, dear Bharati
the poem is really cool.As Minnie Froh said, why can't we vote?
I answered the question: problem, with the ''rating'', is that there are people who simple like to 'joke' with the function... they are a minority, I know, but they are not so few... unfortunately
i would give a full 10 also to this tanka. why you don't want us to vote?
problem, with the ''rating'', is that there are people who simple like to 'joke' with the function... they are a minority, I know, but they are not so few... unfortunately
perché per renderlo correttamente in italiano dovrei usare un numero maggiore di sillabe, e questo non mi va... ;)
thank you, dear Rini. BTW, not a poem from you, for in the Anthology ' HOMO HOMINI LUPUS - Why To kill a Mockingbird? ' ?
Any fresh information about the health of Dr Fabrizio?