Tanka - Farewell Comments

Nobody succeeded in controlling emotions nor this Tanka.

This heart is aching! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

I am saving it to my favorite's list! A perfect 10!

All emotions of such situation, are compressed in this tanka...you have managed to capture these moments of emotional intensity, aptly. This is a pure, real experience: unless felt, cannot be comprehended. Amazing write!

Phir mujhe deedae tar yad aaya, dil jigar tishnaye faryad aaya, dum lya tha na qyamat ne hanooz, phir tera waqte safar yad aaya (Mirza Ghalib)