Monday, November 1, 2021

Tanka ~ Fall Comments

Rating: 5.0

bowed down to the ground
shadow of the tallest tree
fall of false pride-
a resting place for the monks
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M. Asim Nehal
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Rebecca Navarre 03 November 2021

Another very heart moving poem! .. With much wisdom and sorrow in this! .. Excellently expressed! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++

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Shreya Hacks 01 November 2021

Marvellous poem, It has everything.

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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