Saturday, May 28, 2016

Tanka - Dragonfly Comments

Rating: 5.0

two trees meet as one
two dragonflies dart past them
through an empty branch
over water and oars drip
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M. Asim Nehal
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T Rajan Evol 26 July 2020

Symbolic in this poem is outstanding

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Darren Jkoeryo 11 June 2016

Awesome Tanka...10+++

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M Asim Nehal 26 December 2018

Thank u Darren..

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Edward Kofi Louis 29 May 2016

Praising the ways of nature! Nice work.

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Kelly Kurt 28 May 2016

A wonderfully written piece. I thoroughly enjoyed

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Darren Jkoeryo 28 May 2016

Amazing Tanka, a story in it, a life lived and cherished.

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Unwritten Soul 28 May 2016

Story of past, reminiscence for today...vivid image there

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