Saturday, December 11, 2021

Tanka ~ Color Comments

Rating: 5.0

from dawn to the dusk
under the bright sunlight
it changes color
the man and the nature
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M. Asim Nehal
COMMENTS
Suzon Albert 12 December 2021

Cute tanka. Adorable.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 12 December 2021

Gorgeous Tanka, Dr. M. Asim Nehal Sir! 5 Stars*****

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 11 December 2021

A wonderful Tanka full of metaphors. Life is full of colors and they change now and then.

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Rajan Trajan Renganathan 11 December 2021

The story of life in short.

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Rajan Trajan Renganathan 11 December 2021

I m amused. how well you said it in this tanka.

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Tihama Hykam 11 December 2021

Brilliant Tanka. It has all shades of life.

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Poetic Sky 11 December 2021

Agree...from dawn to the dusk under the bright sunlight it changes color...full stars

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Mamta S 11 December 2021

Super tanka. Like nature we change but it differs in stature.

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