Saturday, September 4, 2021

Tanka ~ Change Comments

Rating: 4.4

the tangerine touch
changing colors in the sky
dark black in minutes
life on earth of a person ~
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M. Asim Nehal
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Sylvia Frances Chan 06 September 2021

31 Excellent syllables, Mr.Asim Sir! 5 Stars full on Top!

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 06 September 2021

Asim ji You are a Tanka Master! many many stars

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 06 September 2021

A Tanka written with such depth and meaning -----Beautiful...

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 06 September 2021

A lovely Tanka on life mingled with the wonders of nature. Beautiful

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Mamta S 05 September 2021

Blend of truth with philosophy.

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Shreya Hacks 04 September 2021

All times are changing time. Day and night go on and on.

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Rajan Trajan Renganathan 04 September 2021

Change is inevitable.

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