the tangerine touch
changing colors in the sky
dark black in minutes
life on earth of a person ~
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Asim ji You are a Tanka Master! many many stars
A Tanka written with such depth and meaning -----Beautiful...
A lovely Tanka on life mingled with the wonders of nature. Beautiful
31 Excellent syllables, Mr.Asim Sir! 5 Stars full on Top!