Tuesday, June 19, 2018

Tanka: By Dawn's Early Light Comments

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a sea of clouds tinged in

red, white and blue
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Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black
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Captain Cur 23 August 2018

I am trying to picture the scene. Would have loved to see it. Truth is stranger and a lot more fun than fiction. A Patriotic early bird, I can hear that tune. A great title and a great write.

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Thank you..

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Practicing Poetess 20 June 2018

Simply lovely, Lorraine Margueritte! Very colourful.

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Chinedu Dike 19 June 2018

Well thought out and elegantly brought forth. Thanks for sharing Lorraine.

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