Tanka: Blessed Vision Comments

Beautiful Tanka. A pleasure to read and visualize the blessed day.

Using 31 syllables in all and giving a complete picture of... Oh yes I see a blessed sky

Wow a beautifully descriptive tanka. Reminds me of the birds eggs I used to see in our backyard years back. Kudos. Soo nice to read from u again. Pls do review comment my latest poem too, titled, saints and sinners/ordinary folks