let time preserve us
in memorials and tombs
as memory dust ~
will speak about our valor:
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This touching, lovely poem is in my Favorites. Wonderful writing!
Settling of memories with time is a great phrase, I liked the way you drafted it.
Memories- precious. Nice Tanka having a beautiful structure
Life is not so easy and smooth...how we cross over the obstacles is what matters a lot...nice write...liked