Sunday, August 15, 2021

Tanka ~ A Travel. Comments

Rating: 5.0

travel through the eyes
mind thus will accommodate
everything of life
under the cluster of heart
...
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M. Asim Nehal
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Deepak S S 17 August 2021

WOw: under the cluster of heart with sequence of love...What a wonderful lines filled with images.

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Rajesh Bilkali 17 August 2021

Smart Tanka. True travel during this pandemic.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 16 August 2021

Totally Top tuning Tanka so tremendously beautiful while voting this 5 Stars full on Top! Truly Beautiful!

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Dr Pintu Mahakul 16 August 2021

Every sequence of love is painted in the rays of heart's emotion and love is the power to motivate each perception. Your poem is very interesting one definitely.

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Anjandev Roy 16 August 2021

Brilliant piece.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 16 August 2021

A beautiful mind might have written this Bravo!

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Michael Jack 16 August 2021

Distance is in mind now.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 16 August 2021

A sequence of love through eyes and heart....top marks

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 16 August 2021

A fabulous Tanka, Asim ji

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Mamta S 16 August 2021

Very innovative tanka.

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Shreya Hacks 15 August 2021

A wonderful love story in tanka format. Niche.

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