Tanka - A Sad Evening Comments

Life is like that at times! Thanks for sharing.

Beautiful, beautiful. That speaks for a lot of us. So simply expressed but these words carry a lot of weight.10

After birth death comes like after morning sun rises and rests in West for sunset. This is wise humor that talks about life...10

This describes my nightly ritual for nearly 15 years

oh, the melancholy in these words- -you selected exactly the right words and exactly the right images and oh how immediately the sadness of this surrounded me. That is very good writing, my friend. 10+++

We all carry that little sadness in our heart and it emerges when encountered with solitude. BEautiful thought Asim.10

Nice tanka, Asimji..

sadness will emerge, playing melancholy song.. I too feel sad for the character..if someone does Yoga, he/she is always rejuvenated..Thank you for sharing Asim. Beautiful expression of comparing night to the sadness..