sky clear azure blue
the autumn's picturesque view
the wildflowers bloom
teens on a picnic party
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A fun time from busy school days / college days. Quality time together.
You reminded me my school days picnic and the fun time we all always longed. Beautiful.
A very fascinating Tanka, dear Asim Sir! 5 Stars fullest on Top! Teens on a picnic party, so sweetest!
A fabulous little poem! Loved the picnic of singing birds!
A well painted gathering of teens embellished with beautiful images of nature. Lovely Tanka! ! Top Marks
Lovely tanka with a nice imagery...5*****