Tuesday, August 3, 2021

Tanka ~ A Picnic Comments

Rating: 5.0

sky clear azure blue
the autumn's picturesque view
the wildflowers bloom
teens on a picnic party
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M. Asim Nehal
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Indira Renganathan 08 August 2021

Lovely tanka with a nice imagery...5*****

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Maria Mitea 04 August 2021

Beautifully written, Asim!

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Juhaina Tumlu 04 August 2021

A fun time from busy school days / college days. Quality time together.

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Varsha M 03 August 2021

You reminded me my school days picnic and the fun time we all always longed. Beautiful.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 03 August 2021

A very fascinating Tanka, dear Asim Sir! 5 Stars fullest on Top! Teens on a picnic party, so sweetest!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 03 August 2021

A fabulous little poem! Loved the picnic of singing birds!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 03 August 2021

A well painted gathering of teens embellished with beautiful images of nature. Lovely Tanka! ! Top Marks

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