Tanka ~ ~ Comments
a fallen dewdrop
descended on a leaf
giving it a hope.
pain drips from the eyes
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Yes Yes Yes You have wrote what I feel in this time Bravo!
Tears cleanses the heart from all the brokeness of life. Beautiful tanka 5*******
So well written. Dewdrops fallen on leaf signifies life after and eye drops pain after.
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7/22/2025 8:38:43 AM # 1.0.0
let us hope some thing better in spring.Beautifully sketched.