Tanka ~ ~ Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Tanka ~ ~

Rating: 5.0


a fallen dewdrop
descended on a leaf
giving it a hope.
pain drips from the eyes
like, autumn melancholy.

Monday, December 20, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: pain,life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nabakishore Dash 22 December 2021

let us hope some thing better in spring.Beautifully sketched.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 21 December 2021

Yes Yes Yes You have wrote what I feel in this time Bravo!

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Aarzoo Mehek 20 December 2021

Tears cleanses the heart from all the brokeness of life. Beautiful tanka 5*******

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Suzon Albert 20 December 2021

Burden shredded. Great feeling.

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Suzon Albert 20 December 2021

So well written. Dewdrops fallen on leaf signifies life after and eye drops pain after.

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