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dream gently unfolds
like a fresh spring from mountain
butterfly flutters
reality skirmishes
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Fresh spring unfolds the mountain and dreams unfold us amazingly. There is deep natural connection. This poem is very amazingly and brilliantly penned with much amazement..10
dream is a power In life of marching ahead pioneer life light Eucalyptus roots go deep To catch the colorful sky
May the dreams unfold just like nature spreads the beauty all around. Nice thought Asim.10+++
A brilliant thanks with great philosophical implications....Top score!
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8/1/2025 11:35:21 PM # 1.0.0
Wind will definitely tickle. Fantastic poem.