Tuesday, September 20, 2016

(tanka-3) On A Trail Of Time Comments

Rating: 5.0

See ten thousand years
Leave immense granite boulders
In stony silence;
Where glaciers retreated here,
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Bill Galvin
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Susan Williams 01 October 2016

Oh, yes! ! ! The history of ages permeates this awesome poem. I can see this trail you hiked among the giant boulders left from millions of years back to the dawn of time and isn't it fascinating to touch what had been present perhaps during the time of the dinosaur, and the construction of the Greek temples, and the Viking ships that set sail to find other lands..... oh, so definite a 10, my friend... and a spot on my; list of favorite poems

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Bill Galvin 01 October 2016

Thanks, Susan... so glad you appreciated it... we're only here a second or two.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 20 September 2016

Boulders, ten-foot high, Strewn; left from the last Ice Age; Strong and unmoving; Sense the Time long before us, And ten thousand years from now Nicely written poem about the perennial timeline of the Earth. Thanks for sharing this with us.10 marks for it.

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Bill Galvin 01 October 2016

Thank you Subhas... much appreciated

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