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Much deeper than at first it seems, It's purity and innocence, The reader can further esteem. Thank you.

Comments transferred from PF, a dear poetry site that will close soon. I like its freshness and innocent appeal... 27 May 2011 by eleanor prince xdomo arigato for sharing and the translation 27 May 2011 by spysgrandson assist her to keep the beleif and strength as she has uttered so nicely...Am a child of Earth. Good wishes with her. 27 May xОчень хорошо, Елена! 27 May 2011 by bogpan xWonderful for such a young poet 27 May 2011 by mitch xBeautiful. Nice write 30 May 2011 by Ravi Sathasivam