Wednesday, May 25, 2016

Tanka Comments

Rating: ★5.0

six months old toddler
with little bony fingers
prodding my shoulder
how do i understand him?
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M. Asim Nehal
Toddler
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Poetic Sky 12 September 2020

Amusing tanka. How i wonder what he says.

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Darren Jkoeryo 28 May 2016

Language of eyes and emotions.

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Nosheen Irfan 25 May 2016

Awesome...i'm trying to write a Tanka. This one is of great help. You have a wonderful observation of life. Thanks for sharing.10

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Kelly Kurt 25 May 2016

Probably just as mile.: -)

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Edward Kofi Louis 25 May 2016

With the patience of life. Nice work.

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

Nagpur
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Nagpur
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