Tanka - 1st Try Comments

This is a meaningful piece..... thanks for sharing...

A prefect 10 Bravo! ! ! !

Thank you for sharing! *******endless stars!

2) But in the "world within" which is a world of imagination, everything is possible. The metaphor of "night sky" gels with the theme. Beautiful

Beautiful tanka. Exquisite commentary on the "world within". One would realise, through the course of one's life, that in real life that is in the "world without" not many things are possible. (Contd)