Saturday, August 4, 2018

Tanka 18 (Moon) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Half moon past two am.
unusual is its hue
Summer air is warm
eyes not used to such colors
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Savita Tyagi
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Indira Renganathan 06 August 2018

Midnight moon is always a bliss...you have brought out very well its essence and how you feel watching it in this cute beautiful Tanka format.....like it a lot Savita (! 0)

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Dr Dillip K Swain 04 August 2018

An elegant piece of poetry dear madam! Thanks for sharing....10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 August 2018

Soul feasts on glorious view with the wonderful perception of half moon in summer sky. An Amazing poem is interestingly and excellently penned with nice imagery. Moon whether half or full this attracts attention of poets always...10

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