Wednesday, August 24, 2016

Tanka - 17 Comments

Rating: 4.8

lined up at saloon
all women want perfect looks
but feet are wiser
they take for window shopping
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M. Asim Nehal
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Kelly Kurt 24 August 2016

You have a wonderful grasp on human nature

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Abduhoo Salamath 24 August 2016

woow...very nice written...wonderil poem..

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 August 2016

After the break of the day! Nice work.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 August 2016

Amusing one. Thanks for sharing.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 August 2016

Like pigeon returning home this humor returns to mind again and again. What an amazing poem this is really! ...10

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Nosheen Irfan 24 August 2016

Very witty write. Lovely to read.

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M. Asim Nehal

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