Tuesday, August 23, 2016

Tanka - 16 Comments

Rating: 5.0

wear this mask daily
white powder and painted lips
softness in your eyes
nothing to embrace further
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M. Asim Nehal
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Hazel Durham 04 September 2016

Stunning write, I love the imagery a sense of mystique and brilliant choice of words!

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 August 2016

Painted lips! ! Facing the ways of life. Thanks for sharing.

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Savita Tyagi 23 August 2016

Beautiful. Loved the last two lines.

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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