Saturday, August 22, 2009

*tanka 14: Incoming Waves Comments

Rating: 2.7

incoming waves
push sea foam up the wet beach
almost into dunes.
a tent hides lovers – his hand
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Lillian Susan Thomas
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Sonya Florentino 27 August 2009

ah! , and it seems a different kind of wave is coming! !

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Susan Jarvis 27 August 2009

Wow, so many sensuous images in so few words. S :)

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