like a fine dancer,
standing on mother earth's lap
the branch curved, etched, curled,
Into a splendid posture,
The majestic, dancing tree!
5-7-5-7-7
A well crafted Tanka that depicts the wonderful attribute of a tree. A beautiful poem with superb imagery.
Love! .. The beautiful painting of yours too! .. God has Blessed you in many ways! .. Endless 10'S And Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++++++
Absolutely beautiful! .. Love the imagery and heart written into this! ..
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Such a visionary verse, Geeta. I'm remided of Wordsworth.