Tanka-1 Poem by Bharati Nayak

Awesome imagery and nice feelings....A season to cherish...10+++

Well constructed Tanka Bharati... nicely described the setting in of rainy season... thanks for sharng...

The withdrawal of hot summer and advent of wet monsoon enlivens your heart bursting in to emotional greenery......summary of your breath-taking poem.....thanks for sharing..

The tanka is a form which you have mastered, and I want to write more of these myself. As I read it, you are writing about autumn, a season which you like. It is my favorite season also.

Summer withdrawn Dark blue Clouds marching Across the sky Green in every corner My heart comes alive a iovely poen. Thanks for sharimg. 10++++++

i like this, bharati! the last two lovely lines make this about much more than a weather event and make this poem resonate. here in new mexico we have monsoon pattern rains. albuquerque where i live gets nine inches of rain in a good year. so dances to summon rains are common among pueblo peoples and naturally enough, a resident here for more than forty years, i've written several poems on the subject. if you're interested, among them are refresh, o God; fat clouds; huge dark clouds; rain prayer; and snail mornings. all the best to you! glen

Rainy season after hot summer, has always been attractive for the lovers. A beautiful poem nicely penned.

Nature! ! With the muse of life across the sky. Nice work.