Thursday, January 28, 2016

Tanka - 1 Comments

Rating: ★5.0

She is beautiful
till the time she keeps smiling
when she opens her mouth
volcano erupts from eyes
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M. Asim Nehal
volcano Volcano
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Poetic Sky 12 September 2020

Oh great. Mouth is the flood gate to.

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Darren Jkoeryo 28 May 2016

Ha ha ha..Nice humour.

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T Rajan Evol 02 February 2016

One of the best Tanka I have read so far...Hats Off Asimji.

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Kelly Kurt 28 January 2016

A perfect Tanka, Mohammed. Descriptive and emotive opening with a twist at the end. A 10

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Abhilasha Bhatt 28 January 2016

Hilarious......just loved it.....thank you for sharing :)

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Aarzoo Mehek 28 January 2016

hahahahaha so don't you dare mess up with her: D 10 plusssssss for voicing the truth.

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