Kuch apni si
Kuch parayi
Tanhaai..
Kuch subha main
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Kisi ka ek sheyr hay- - - - - - - Ab udas phirte ho sardion ki shamon mein Is tarah to hota is tarah ke kamon mein. Bhavnaein jab singhar karti hayn ro to asha bhi abhilasha bankar kavita ka roop dharan kar leti hay, atyant sunder!
This is your best one. Hindi poetry me to chha jati hain aap. Bahot khub :)
Spellbound poetry....... Great analytical power and narration style.......
Kabhi ye dard hota hai soch k kyun hoti hai Tanhaayi Bheed mein bhi Akela kar jaati akelepan mein khud ko milwati tanhayi Aapki kavita padh k Kuch meethe dard mehsus karwati tanhayi Dard ko kisi kone mein kareeb yuhi rakhna bahut zaroori hai ye parchayi Simple words deep meaning Keep it up
Mujh main basti hai yahi tanhaai...mere andar k shakhs main hai chai tanhaai...thank you for your comment rishi.. :)
ek duniyaa hai ki hangaama hii hangaama hai aur ik mai.n huu.n ki tanhaaii hii tanhaaii hai Mahendra Singh Bedi Sahar
Meri zindagi ki parchai..mere zindagi k asmaan par abron si chai...tanhai :)
Kbhi chup si Kbhi bolti Tanhaai..... तन्हाई का ऐसा चित्र खींचा है आपने कि जैसे यह अभी बोलने लगेगी. बहुत सुंदर. धन्यवाद.
It's really great when u speak ur heart out...... waisey to mujey likhney key hunar nhi aatey....... hum jab haley dil sunatey hain to log wah wah krtey hain....... grrtt penned