Monday, July 4, 2011

Tango D'Amore Comments

Rating: 5.0

Staring at the one you love and perspire
Intense emotions confined in balls of fire
The black shirt covers his bold tattoos
While she stands and it's him she refuses
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 04 July 2011

Nice poem written with great skill and wisdom. The poem is rich in imagery. Well done. I rate it 10. Please read and rate my poem 'Abortion' on page 4. Warmest regards Akmal

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Kristina Louisa Carr

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