Thursday, March 2, 2006

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Tight, taught, torsos, entwined together,
Firm, fired, flesh, as one forever,
Eyes entice, enslave each other,
Moist, mouths, meet and we are lovers.
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Teedy Dawn
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Charles Chaim Wax 02 March 2006

a stunning narrative the feel just right and true and for me only a memory but so sweet you have called it to life a fine poem

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Teedy Dawn

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