Thursday, October 22, 2009

Tangled Webs Comments

Rating: 5.0

The hunter looking for his prey
took refuge on his tree
waiting - waiting - she on the way?
(The prey was you, the hunter me.)
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Lorenzo Costigliolo
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Patti Masterman 29 October 2009

Really enjoyed this hunt between hunter and prey; who was stalking who, and why, gets lost in the fascinating ending, just like in real life sometimes.

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Tai Chi Italy 22 October 2009

Deaths are sometimes sooooooooo sweet, and this is one, entangled in the web of you? Wow! ! ! fantabulous lines you have her dangling on with a tugging smile from Tai

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