Monday, December 17, 2018

Tangled Up Comments

Rating: 5.0

Help me make sense of this mess in my head
Like a tangled ball of wool
It needs unravelling and starting again
So I can get all my thoughts straight
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Jennifer Birchall
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Julia Luber 23 March 2019

" the tangled ball of wool' has unravelled into another delightful poem. That must be the you you know back!

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Julia Luber 01 March 2019

compelling poem about losing sight of oneself and knowing something about one's soul is gone and demanding it back!

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Julia Luber 16 February 2019

If the internet ads would stop interrupting my reading, I think I could get rid of this mess in my head.

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 December 2018

Upright! ! Positiveness! Overcoming. Thoughts! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing.

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Dr Antony Theodore 17 December 2018

It needs unravelling and starting again So I can get all my thoughts straight. mind, how it works. thoughts how it originates and how we are... very nice thoughts. thank u dear poetess Jenni

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Jennifer Birchall

Jennifer Birchall

Cheshire, England
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