Sunday, July 10, 2011

Tangled Comments

Rating: 5.0

Rhymed were our lives from the start,
But our ignorance made it fall apart.
Now riven we tread on these lost sands.
Missing parts of us, yet we stand.
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rimjhim singh
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 10 July 2011

Marvellous poem written with great skill. Rich in imagery and emotions. I liked and rated it 10. Please read and rate my poem 'ABORTION' on page 4.

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