Tamara The Sequel Comments

Such beautiful words, along with strong and enduring imagery. I loved your poem.

No one has come even close to your verse! In my book!

Interesting poem, thank you for sharing....................10++++++++++

Loved it. Does justice to describe another place, another time.

Hello, no wonder you will really appreciate my poem Making Love'. And have you read my Illicit Love.Beware? Romance? Almost all my poems expressing passion, runs like yours. Maybe we have the same waves of poetry. This poem of yours express too much love, aside from desire, which was very visually seen by the creative minds. if you are the character of the prince charming, your love is great, full of passion... Good interpretation.. Very well written!

Eroticism is rarely done justice, even with as many plaintiff words one might carry for their defense. However, you have by far come closer to reeling in the most bountiful and tremendous joys a poet can ever have.... Seeing his work ripple through others as it does you. Lovely little piece, it sent ripples quite marvelously.

It's wonderful writing. You bring the story alive and suceed in capture all the detail into view. tks for sharing

'The dried leaves cripple, lifeless, Stomped underneath his restless feet ' These 2 lines drew me right in like bait...keep it up :)

This poem needs music. It's an Aria. And History is good. A memory is all one needs.

i enjoyed 'Mayati' so i had to read the sequel; although it starts again like the first with the lifeless; here again is celebrated life and passion.

wow! that was, i just- i honestly dont know what to say im speechless, i have no words and this like, never happens to me, words are my life! you took the words out of my mouth! if you can do that, then you have some wonderfulu talent! i loved this

Wow what a really expressive poem, it makes the image tangible in my mind. Very well put into words good job my friend.

A nice poem! well-expressed feeling of love...

Very.....'how would i put it'..... detailed :)

Strong imagery and a well-imagined story. Well done.

Fantastic! ! I like your poem..... give more of this sort.... Thank you for sharing.

aww so lovely! ! thank you so much for sharing such a wonderful piece of art!

A beautiful story and well penned. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing with me

This poem takes you on a journey that as you read you feel that you are there. A good read with a good feel.

lovely poem; depicted the beauty of love so beautifully in your words.