Monday, July 27, 2009

Tamara Princess Of Satira Comments

Rating: 4.5

I walk; carry the weight of the sands, dust particles of gold
Beneath, lay the tomb, resurrected in chamber of seven
Headed snake, guarding the abandoned soul of Princess Tamara
From Hanaring, the city of guardian angel
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof
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Tamara Beryl Latham 09 February 2020

Beautiful words and images. I loved your poem. : -)

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Mimi Fakhira 11 May 2012

This is amazing. I absolutely love it :)

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Saeid Hadavand 07 November 2009

Nice naming: Tamara Princess of Satira. I like that... and the poem is great too. Thanks.

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Genese Lozada 02 October 2009

sounds great dude...you've got a talent that could never be questioned

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Gargi Saha 16 August 2009

A very intense, romantic poem.

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Carol Tepana 13 August 2009

passionate when read feeling that i was tamara who's love is so be on those who see her

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ك ل ا م ج م ي ل ج د ا very nice ++++++++++10

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Jack Price 08 August 2009

very whimsical and charming poem and I see it has been well recieved here at the site. thank you for the invte...... J. L.

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Gillena Cox 07 August 2009

this an interesting epic, full of life and passion

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Rosalinda Martinez 07 August 2009

thanks for sharing to us the elegance of mayati... keep writing!

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Mark Nwagwu 06 August 2009

I think I've read this and posted my commets. Still, this time around it sounds to me like an epic, a romance for and from the gods, to bless or destroy. You seem to stride across several cultures - ah! the gods blend all in your soul, my friend. mark.

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Sadiqullah Khan 05 August 2009

The good thing about your poem is its disposability, quickly changing the name of the 'princess' and retaining the substance. A lot effort is here, to save yourself some ground against the odds and discovery of the treasure. Some scenes are from the 'mummy II'.10 from me.

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Chris Mendros 04 August 2009

Thoughtful tribute to a woman powerful enough to turn the prince's gray heart red.

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Saadat Tahir 04 August 2009

hi...mate havent you changed it.... i think i commented on this and it was differnt but this improvement is better...yes it shows uv spent time improving it well done cheers

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Anabel just Anabel 04 August 2009

simply AWESOME! ! pretty sick! ! gotta go read the sequel...

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Howard Johnson 04 August 2009

Hi Sulaiman. Dropped by and read your fine work and gave it a 10, Thank you for sharing.

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Prashant Shaurya 03 August 2009

i mean i m left speechless....u r simply superb...and ya give me sum tips to enlarge my vocab...n nw i m goin to read the sequel..so bye

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Shahzada Imtiaz Ali 02 August 2009

o, man! ! ! you have a good vocabulary and good rhymes. great job

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 01 August 2009

From: Richard Jarboe (stockton United States; Male; 60) To: Sulaiman Mohd Yusof Date Time: 8/1/2009 6: 44: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: tamara very passionate. good work, richard

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Nurwilmy Francis 01 August 2009

very deep in thoughts indeed. i felt as though i was in the pharoah's time. great piece

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