Talyn Comments

An uplifting prayer to our Maker, Lynda xx 10

a nice uplifting verses...like prayer...the concept is within to believe in God...10

This is a lovely poem Lilo. Many of the POEMHUNTERS are spiritual people so I am sure it will be well received. Stanza one gets right to the heart of our faith - it's all about JESUS! In the next three stanzas you describe God's love and care for you in difficult circumstances. In stanza four you turn to praise, to God, for the gift of life, the sustenance of life, for our Faith and for bearing our burdens. The final stanza is very emotive. You pray for the spiritual power to forgive your adversaries and you also pray that they might mend their evil ways - awesome. Well done a poem of living faith. I scored it 9.

I can feel and relate to a sense of eternal connection with the Higher Power! well done

Yeah, you're true! You know I like the first line of the last verse of this poem. It's hard to forgive without God's help. Thanks for sharing to me this poem!

This is a fine tribute, your love of God comes through very strongly in this poem. You ha ve a gift for writing poetry so keep writing.

another fine piec eof poetry. keep posting. you are good.. your poetry ods Great.

I wish I can believe in god.. But I can't.. this again is a beautiful write.. you have written this with so much emotions too.. use your gifts to make a difference to the world/..... with lots of lovess shan

your words full of emotion for god beautiful

Another good one, great emotion & reverence for your belief in the almighty

well crafted poem! ! ! ! Really lovely! ! ! god has always been our greatest strength! Continue writing! God bless! -Pink Butterfly-